Tuesday, September 26, 2006

windows and doors ... haiku for One Deep Breath

Ginger Cat Dreaming

This week's prompt on One Deep Breath was to write haiku using images of windows and/or doors. Here is my contribution. For more go to One Deep Breath.


stormy day
rain spatters leaf strewn path
windows rattle

smell of baking bread
gust of wind blows
the door ajar

ginger cat dreams
sparrows feeding just beyond
the window pane

outside
the river flows without end
inside I cannot hear it


jzr

6 comments:

bb said...

i am a sucker for a cute kitty ... and that is such a cute kitty!!!
fantastic photo and beautiful haiku too :-)

Crafty Green Poet said...

My favourites are haiku two and three! Lovely kitten too!

Tammy said...

Cute kitty! These were all lovely especially the baking bread ;)

Clare said...

My favourite haiku is the last one :)

Such a cute cat too!

Anonymous said...

These set a wonderful scene - the stormy day, the bread baking, the sleeping kitty. A fabulous mood in these words.

Lovely!

susanlavonne said...

when i'm posting the links, i often think i have commented when sadly i have not so please forgive my tardiness on this one...
i love the way you employ all the senses in this haiku...and in such appealing and fragrant ways :-)