Wednesday, December 20, 2006

Storms ... for One Deep Breath


This weeks prompt on One Deep Breath is "storms." It is a stormy time of year. It is a stormy time of life.

angry tears
like sudden summer rain
thunder and lightning, too

hot tempered heart
autumnal gusts of leaves
chilled by rimey nights

in winter’s hand
wind carries frozen crystals
the field a drift of snow

April’s greening pasture
early birds sing at dawn
a sudden flood of mirth


jzr



9 comments:

Mike Mc said...

I enjoyed your storms, thanks.

Sandy said...

Beautiful photo! All your poems are good, my favorite is the third one, I think my mind is stuck on the photo image!

JanePoe said...

Wonderful imagery in this fantastic poem. Great photograph as well.
Much peace and warm holiday wishes, JP

Neasa said...

Very nice haiku, all. The first is my favorite, though.

Crafty Green Poet said...

Excellent haiku series - the seasonal storms of our lives! I like that it ends in Spring.

Tammy said...

You did each season beautifully! I really connected to Autumn. Very creative!

getzapped said...

These are wonderful! A little journey through the seasons. Love the photo!

Visual-Voice said...

very very very very good. Did I include enough veries?

paris parfait said...

Wonderful depiction of storms in your extraordinary poems. Great photo too!