This weeks prompt on One Deep Breath is "storms." It is a stormy time of year. It is a stormy time of life.
angry tears
like sudden summer rain
thunder and lightning, too
hot tempered heart
autumnal gusts of leaves
chilled by rimey nights
in winter’s hand
wind carries frozen crystals
the field a drift of snow
April’s greening pasture
early birds sing at dawn
a sudden flood of mirth
jzr
like sudden summer rain
thunder and lightning, too
hot tempered heart
autumnal gusts of leaves
chilled by rimey nights
in winter’s hand
wind carries frozen crystals
the field a drift of snow
April’s greening pasture
early birds sing at dawn
a sudden flood of mirth
jzr
9 comments:
I enjoyed your storms, thanks.
Beautiful photo! All your poems are good, my favorite is the third one, I think my mind is stuck on the photo image!
Wonderful imagery in this fantastic poem. Great photograph as well.
Much peace and warm holiday wishes, JP
Very nice haiku, all. The first is my favorite, though.
Excellent haiku series - the seasonal storms of our lives! I like that it ends in Spring.
You did each season beautifully! I really connected to Autumn. Very creative!
These are wonderful! A little journey through the seasons. Love the photo!
very very very very good. Did I include enough veries?
Wonderful depiction of storms in your extraordinary poems. Great photo too!
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