Lotus Seed Pod, Joan Z. Rough © 2006This weeks prompt for One Deep Breath is "close up."
asleep within
swollen spheres
seeds of life
slender roots expand
in water’s fecund flow
goldfish spawning
in summer sun
lotus blossoms flourish
cycle unbroken
jzr
swollen spheres
seeds of life
slender roots expand
in water’s fecund flow
goldfish spawning
in summer sun
lotus blossoms flourish
cycle unbroken
jzr
7 comments:
first the photograph took my breath away...then again when i read your haiku
i would site the lines that i liked best, but would end up just quoting the entire piece...truly an incredible response tot his week's prompt :-)
Truly stunning photo and three excellent haiku too. Well done!
That photo is absolutely astounding, and so is the haiku. I agree with Susan, every line is a stunner. And the alliteration is marvelous.
Superb!
The photo was great but your haiku made it even better. Well done!
fecund flow
What a great phrase. This was actually a nice triplet. Intriging photo BTW.
Very interesting image. Your ku's are just as interesting!
I can only be an echo - beautiful photography perfect match of words
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