tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27065066.post115817847782120428..comments2023-05-07T05:56:39.712-04:00Comments on rivanna river days: my name is sally ... for Poetry Thursdayjzrhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05938966640494785871noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27065066.post-1158549927229714392006-09-17T23:25:00.000-04:002006-09-17T23:25:00.000-04:00i needa placein the sunlovely.i need<BR/>a place<BR/>in the sun<BR/><BR/><BR/>lovely.michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15684528126514742135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27065066.post-1158356682679798382006-09-15T17:44:00.000-04:002006-09-15T17:44:00.000-04:00Such a powerful poem - very touching and sad - and...Such a powerful poem - very touching and sad - and all too real. With your words you've captured the sad way of life for too many people. The minute I read this, I immediately thought of a homeless woman I used to see on occasion in San Mateo, California.paris parfaithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05457437124988976587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27065066.post-1158330190224436032006-09-15T10:23:00.000-04:002006-09-15T10:23:00.000-04:00hello! this was great. great description and insig...hello! this was great. great description and insight into us really being able to feel close to sally and her life.lisrobbehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01627883248373581753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27065066.post-1158265349191884662006-09-14T16:22:00.000-04:002006-09-14T16:22:00.000-04:00Yes, Sally really speaks to me through this poem. ...Yes, Sally really speaks to me through this poem. Well done.Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27065066.post-1158259917998762892006-09-14T14:51:00.000-04:002006-09-14T14:51:00.000-04:00hello. my first visit to your blog: i like the cri...hello. my first visit to your blog: i like the crisp way you capture sally's voice.kjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15122196887043345981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27065066.post-1158255770213054052006-09-14T13:42:00.000-04:002006-09-14T13:42:00.000-04:00That is so very well done. The line that just real...That is so very well done. The line that just really caught my heart completely was "I lost my comb". Such a small thing, and such a big thing! Thank you.GreenishLadyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16344455769443353585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27065066.post-1158236493980973112006-09-14T08:21:00.000-04:002006-09-14T08:21:00.000-04:00I think is pretty amazing. The short lines work we...I think is pretty amazing. The short lines work well, and really capture the rhythm of a slightly senseless rant. Nice job!mareymercyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03407666873261385487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27065066.post-1158236400064980622006-09-14T08:20:00.000-04:002006-09-14T08:20:00.000-04:00You've really captured Sally's voice, and drawn th...You've really captured Sally's voice, and drawn the reader right into that sad and frightening world of homelessness. Very moving...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com